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Wednesday, October 20, 2010
... why you shouldn't leave class early.
I found out about this assignment yesterday since I skipped the last part of class Thursday :). So I had to quickly throw something together so any suggestions/critiques would be AWESOME!
I like that you chose different colors to represent the different voices. And the typeface fits the style of the movie that the clip is from.
I think the L is missing from necklace.
You know what I would love to see? Since they are all talking over the top of each other near the end, I think it would be cool if the text overlapped and bunched up - make it as readable as possible, of course - you could make the loudest voice bigger text or darkest or something like that.
And... Buddy whispers at the end. If you can think of some typographic way to show a whisper... that would be very effective.
All in all, I think you're in a good spot. The extended letter parts are interesting.
I like that you chose different colors to represent the different voices. And the typeface fits the style of the movie that the clip is from.
ReplyDeleteI think the L is missing from necklace.
You know what I would love to see? Since they are all talking over the top of each other near the end, I think it would be cool if the text overlapped and bunched up - make it as readable as possible, of course - you could make the loudest voice bigger text or darkest or something like that.
And... Buddy whispers at the end. If you can think of some typographic way to show a whisper... that would be very effective.
All in all, I think you're in a good spot. The extended letter parts are interesting.
Thanks Sarah!
ReplyDeleteCrap! I haven't checked this in a bit, sorry I was too late to help critique!
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