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Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Self-Mark (for Sarah) #1
This will undoubtedly change after I talk to Alan today, but what do you guys think?
I'm concerned that there is an element of me that isn't showing up enough... like my... human side. But, give me your feedback and maybe something will work with it in the end.
Right off, I really like it, but I think you're exactly right about the human element you feel is lacking. Knowing you, I feel like the mark should have more of a human element. I would focus on keeping the general idea, but morphing it into something more organic and less sleek, if that makes sense...
Right off, I really like it, but I think you're exactly right about the human element you feel is lacking. Knowing you, I feel like the mark should have more of a human element. I would focus on keeping the general idea, but morphing it into something more organic and less sleek, if that makes sense...
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